Thanks for the excellent and detailed feedback. Certainly a lot to think about and digest; probably over a few weeks, before I dive back in to re-writes.
You’ve certainly hit a few nails right on the head. Sometimes, if not most times, it does need another experienced eye to point out the flaws/defects/structural blips and other aspects that stop a screenplay from being the best that it can be, which this certainly isn’t…..yet.
– A. Watters
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